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Fade, just fade, fade from my dreams,
Soar from my side, on pitch black wings.

Fade from my memories,
Blend into the crowd.
Try as you might,
You beauty's too loud.

Fade from my life,
Let me bask in the shade.
Please stop the hurt,
Just let it fade.

Quit pushing away,
I'll stop coming back.
My cloudy eyes see nothing,
Except my heart, turned black.

Your crimson hair,
Flows down your back.
As does my blood,
Down my arm gone slack.

It seems we just,
Don't see eye to eye.
I'm watching the ground,
You're tracing the sky.

My feelings rained down,
As a blood red squall.
I gave you my heart,
I gave you it all.

This ship may be sinking,
But I'll stay aboard.
Walking through moments,
When my heart soared.

I'll sink to the bottom,
Take it all in stride.
You'll find me someday,
Coming in with the tide.
©2006-2009 ~RainWolfJ
:iconrainwolfj:

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:icondagonomega:
F%#@ing Beautyful man, i think thats one of the best poems ive EVER read.

I think the lines flow nicely together, and the words are perfect. Just an all together awesome feel man.

This is def :+fav:. once again nice work.

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Love to The Earth Mother :diny:

"And the television's spewing hate, Talk bout the rise of crime rates, Heard the broke state gonna say it, It's all sinking now and we're way too late," --- Tim Armstrong

---The one and only---
Spencer Omega
:iconrainwolfj:
Thanks...

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I've got you trapped like a tiger in a washing machine!
:icontruely-me-niece:
i love it
its kind of how
i feel right now, just
wish he would fade from
my memory... he's so cute!

--
love = confusion
-------------------------------
true love will find a way
it always does-

i think
:iconrainwolfj:
Yes....I've been wanting her to fade from my life for a few days now....not working though : \

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I've got you trapped like a tiger in a washing machine!
:iconsadistic-sabotage:
Wow. That's... the most emotion I've felt from a poem in a long time. I'm almost in tears. It's so beautiful...

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:music: I'll Feel My Heart Implode... I'm Breaking Out, Escaping Now, Feeling My Faith Erode... :music:
:iconangelpoison:
for your sake, i hope you've forgotten this girl....i re read this every once in awhile when i come across it....it brings me back to earth.
im sorry for what happened to you.

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